INT. BAKERSFIELD DENNY'S - NIGHT (LATER)
Becky is sitting at the counter. A few seats over from her
is an OLDER MAN (late 60s). He dressed in an old grey suit
and tie.
OLDER MAN
Are you alright, ma'am?
BECKY
What?
OLDER MAN
Are you going to be alright? You
seem....you've been sitting there.
A while now. And I want to know if
you're going to be alright.
BECKY
Yes.
HOLD. Becky looks down.
OLDER MAN
Do you want to order something? A
bowl of soup?
BECKY
My friend was supposed to come here
and get me, but he hasn't come.
OLDER MAN
Yes. Well why don't you let me buy
you some soup while you wait for
your friend?
BECKY
No. No. I'm not hungry.
OLDER MAN
You seem hurt and lost. I'm an old
man so I see this, and, knowing that
I don't have much time left to live
on this earth, it hurts my heart to
see people in pain -- more than it
did when I was young, because then I
didn't care. I was a cold young
man, But now, in age, I have a desire
to help -- because I'd like to think
that I've done good things in my
life.
BECKY
Why?
OLDER MAN
To be good. To do good deeds. Maybe;
Well. To make up for things that I
have done in the past. Maybe I've
done things that weren't good...so
now I try to do the opposite. Do
you see?
BECKY
Yes.
The Older Man reaches into his pockets, takes out a quarter
and places it on the counter in front of Becky.
OLDER MAN
Why don't you try calling your friend?
(beat)
You should call your friend, to see
where he is and when he'll be here
for you.
BECKY
I don't think he cares. I think he
might have lied to me.
OLDER MAN
Maybe not. Maybe something happened
that was beyond his control.
BECKY
Maybe.
OLDER MAN
Use the quarter, young lady.
BECKY
Thank you.
Becky takes the quarter and walks to the pay phone.
INT. DIRK'S APARTMENT - THAT MOMENT
Dirk is sitting in the kitchen, smoking his coke pipe.
The PHONE RINGS. CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON DIRK. He watches the
phone ring and ring and ring. Finally, it stops.
Dirk stands up, walks to the front window in the apartment.
He pushes the curtains to the side, and looks out. HOLD.
He puts his ear to the window, then closes the curtains and
walks back to the kitchen area.
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INT. DENNY'S - MOMENTS LATER
Becky is sitting in a booth across from the Older Man. She's
crying.
BECKY
I don't know where to go. I don't
have anywhere to go, I can't get
anywhere.
OLDER MAN
It's alright. It's alright, young
lady.
BECKY
I'm so sorry to make you hear this.
OLDER MAN
I want to help you.
BECKY
No, I can't.
OLDER MAN
You need help. You need someplace
to sleep and to wash. You can't
stay here. I want to help you.
BECKY
You're a nice man.
OLDER MAN
Listen to me a moment, please.
Please. Look up at me; I'm trying
to do things. Like I told you before.
Let me help you.
He stands and holds a hand out to her. She reaches for his
hand.
EXT. BAKERSFIELD RETIREMENT HOME - NIGHT
Becky and the Older Man walk a path up to a small retirement
home on a small, suburban street.
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INT. RETIREMENT HOME - THAT MOMENT
They enter, make a beeline for some stairs. A NURSE spots
them;
NURSE
Mr. Brown...Mr. Brown you can't
bring visitors in here.. Mr. Brown.
Becky and Mr. Brown walk past the Nurse and up the stairs.
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INT. MR BROWN'S ROOM - LATER
Mr. Brown sets Becky up in a chair near a window. He brings
her a blanket and tucks her in like a child, then climbs
into his own bed.
BECKY
Thank you.
MR. BROWN
You'd do the same for me.
CAMERA DOES A SLOW DOLLY IN ON MR. BROWN as he falls asleep.
Monday, October 01, 2007
Deleted Scene: Boogie Nights, Becky & Mr. Brown
A nice elderly man befriends Becky after Dirk fails to show up.
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